CORRECTION COMMENT 10

I think we don't need a dream catcher for our dreams to come true. If you have a dream and you want it to come true, you have to strive, work for it and fight to get it. We have to take advantage of our success and get the best out of it to achieve what you set out to do.

Although it seems difficult or even impossible, all dreams can be made possible if we make an effort and work hard. 

Today nothing is impossible. There are people who have dreamed about living in a tree and they have achieved it, they have built a house in a tree and they have achieved their dreams.

I also have a friend who struggled day to day for music, tried hard and spent a lot of time on it. Now he is famous and can live off music.

I think that fulfilling a dream like this must be something very beautiful, I now see my friend happy and I am very happy, because I have seen how he has fought for it and how he has grown in the world of music.

The fame is difficult, they tend to bother you a lot, both you and the people around you, friends, family... but it is not impossible. And sometimes there are people who can stand you, the so-called "haters", who speak ill of you and despise your work. That is why you always have to think positive and also look at the good things and ignore the bad.

In my opinion everything is possible if you believe it. When someone fulfils a dream around you it is easier to believe it.

We all dream of something, we all have a dream in mind that we want to come true, so we have to believe in ourselves and work hard.

 CORRECTION COMMENT 6

Recently you only hear talk about climate change and nobody is talking about permafrost.

Well, permafrost is very dangerous for the planet, it is the subsoil layer of the earth's crust that is frozen due to its nature. It is found in very cold areas such as Alaska. 

This layer is constantly melting and that is the dangerous thing, because when the ice melts, tons of methane and carbon dioxide are released.

Rising temperatures have sped up the process. Both methane and carbon dioxide are the main gases responsible for the greenhouse effect, which are part of global warming and the progressive destruction of our planet.

 CORRECTION COMMENT 9

Last year the school was doing very well until halfway through the schools year when classes had to be suspended due to the global pandemic. We began to give virtual classes from home, it was a bit strange that the classes were not face-to-face, we were not used to it and it was difficult for us to adapt, some even did not adapt. In my opinion it is much better to give a face-to-face class because you are more attentive and if you get distracted the teacher can easily draw your attention. If the class is online, you can be doing other things while the teacher explains, and if you disturb the teacher, they can confuse and scold another person.

In addition, it is more difficult to concentrate, I for example did not find out any explanation.

This summer I wanted to get my B1 out but I didn't I see myself ready. I want to try it this next summer, if I work hard I will probably succeed.

 CORRECTION COMMENT 8

Every summer there are wildfires because the weather is warmer. Some of these fires are caused by natural causes, such as an accident or thunder, but many of them are caused by humans.

If the fire is small, it can be easily controlled and in a few hours it would be out thanks to the work that firefighters do, but there are some that are very large and difficult to control. Many fields and trees are burned at high speed. If it occurs near a town or near a city, it can become more dangerous, because the fire come near the houses and can burn them.

Last summer there was a forest fire in Alpujarra, which mainly affected Bubión and Capileira. More than a hundred people were needed and it took almost a week to put out the fire. This forest fire burned about 28 hectares.

I think it is a serious problem that we have to avoid, many fields and animals are burned. Many fruits and animal species are lost, people can also die in the fire. Fires also pollute the air with smoke, so if we want to have fresh air and see a beautiful landscape we must take more care of nature.

CORRECTION COMMENT 7

People have always trained their dogs to be able to detect many things through smell, for example diseases such as cancer or any other.

Now we have discovered that dogs are capable of detecting the coronavirus, did you know?

Dogs are able to deduce this due to the great capacity of olfate receptors that they possess. Many smells are analyzed in your brain, since the capacity of your brain is forty times greater than the human brain. They rely on smelling the saliva of infected and uninfected people, and for some reason they detect an odor in infected people. When dogs detect a sick person, they should be rewarded for their work and to let them know that they are doing well.

That dogs are able to do this seems very useful to me, since we could take advantage of them to smell people at airports, to detect infected people and have even more security. This would also be an effective control method and much faster than temperature or prc tests.

In my opinion, dogs are much more intelligent than us, since they have other more developed senses. They can help us and facilitate the prevention of coronavirus.

 CORRECTION COMMENT 5

Exams are done to evaluate our work, student´s work, but it doesn't seem like a good idea to me.

Not everyone makes the same effort, there are people who have a harder time and get worse marks, and for others it is not so hard and they get very good marks.

Taking into account that sometimes we have a bad day and we cannot concentrate the same.

It is true that you have to evaluate in some way, perhaps exams, but in my opinion, teachers should better appreciate the effort of each one, for example doing other types of activities.

 CORRECTION COMMENT 4

We have always been afraid of bees, we believe that they will sting us for no reason, and that is just a myth, they will not sting you if you do not bother them first.

There are people who are not afraid of them because they know that they will not bite them, I for example when I see one I stay still, not to disturb them and make me sure. However, I have friends who are very afraid of them and run away. Bees are essential in this life, they are in charge of pollination.

I think that "Free flowers to bring happiness" is a good deed and it is well thought out, each person who receives the bouquet will feel good and it is a detail.