tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-65239095339855637242024-03-13T11:20:48.302-07:00Natalia's blogNataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6523909533985563724.post-75902927391223547512020-11-07T12:21:00.003-08:002020-11-07T12:21:36.061-08:00<p> CORRECTION COMMENT 10</p><p><br /></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">I think we don't need a dream catcher for our dreams to come true. If you have a dream and you want it to come true, you have to strive, work for it and fight to get it. We have to take advantage of our success and get the best out of it to achieve what you set out to do.</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; min-height: 14px;"><br /></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">Although it seems difficult or even impossible, all dreams can be made possible if we make an effort and work hard. </p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">Today nothing is impossible. There are people who have dreamed about living in a tree and they have achieved it, they have built a house in a tree and they have achieved their dreams.</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">I also have a friend who struggled day to day for music, tried hard and spent a lot of time on it. Now he is famous and can live off music.</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; min-height: 14px;"><br /></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">I think that fulfilling a dream like this must be something very beautiful, I now see my friend happy and I am very happy, because I have seen how he has fought for it and how he has grown in the world of music.</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">The fame is difficult, they tend to bother you a lot, both you and the people around you, friends, family... but it is not impossible. And sometimes there are people who can stand you, the so-called "haters", who speak ill of you and despise your work. That is why you always have to think positive and also look at the good things and ignore the bad.</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; min-height: 14px;"><br /></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">In my opinion everything is possible if you believe it. When someone fulfils a dream around you it is easier to believe it.</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">We all dream of something, we all have a dream in mind that we want to come true, so we have to believe in ourselves and work hard.</p>Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6523909533985563724.post-30640550641037521072020-11-07T06:55:00.001-08:002020-11-07T06:55:10.931-08:00<p><span style="color: #800180;"> CORRECTION COMMENT 6</span></p><p><span style="color: #800180;"><br /></span></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">Recently you only hear talk about climate change and nobody is talking about permafrost.</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">Well, permafrost is very dangerous for the planet, it is the subsoil layer of the earth's crust that is frozen due to its nature. It is found in very cold areas such as Alaska. </p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;"><br /></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">This layer is constantly melting and that is the dangerous thing, because when the ice melts, tons of methane and carbon dioxide are released.</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; min-height: 14px;"><br /></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">Rising temperatures have sped up the process. Both methane and carbon dioxide are the main gases responsible for the greenhouse effect, which are part of global warming and the progressive destruction of our planet.</p>Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6523909533985563724.post-80025989143788598042020-11-07T06:54:00.001-08:002020-11-07T06:54:56.560-08:00<p> <span style="color: #800180;">CORRECTION COMMENT 9</span></p><p><span style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br /></span></p><p><span style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">Last year the school was doing very well until halfway through the schools year when classes had to be suspended due to the global pandemic. We began to give virtual classes from home, it was a bit strange that the classes were not face-to-face, we were not used to it and it was difficult for us to adapt, some even did not adapt. In my opinion it is much better to give a face-to-face class because you are more attentive and if you get distracted the teacher can easily draw your attention. If the class is online, you can be doing other things while the teacher explains, and if you disturb the teacher, they can confuse and scold another person.</span></p><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">In addition, it is more difficult to concentrate, I for example did not find out any explanation.</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br /></div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">This summer I wanted to get my B1 out but I didn't I see myself ready. I want to try it this next summer, if I work hard I will probably succeed.</div>Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6523909533985563724.post-69348092020406442512020-11-07T06:51:00.001-08:002020-11-07T06:51:10.088-08:00<p> <span style="color: #800180;">CORRECTION COMMENT 8</span></p><p><br /></p><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">Every summer there are wildfires because the weather is warmer. Some of these fires are caused by natural causes, such as an accident or thunder, but many of them are caused by humans.</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">If the fire is small, it can be easily controlled and in a few hours it would be out thanks to the work that firefighters do, but there are some that are very large and difficult to control. Many fields and trees are burned at high speed. If it occurs near a town or near a city, it can become more dangerous, because the fire come near the houses and can burn them.</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br /></div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">Last summer there was a forest fire in Alpujarra, which mainly affected Bubión and Capileira. More than a hundred people were needed and it took almost a week to put out the fire. This forest fire burned about 28 hectares.</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br /></div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">I think it is a serious problem that we have to avoid, many fields and animals are burned. Many fruits and animal species are lost, people can also die in the fire. Fires also pollute the air with smoke, so if we want to have fresh air and see a beautiful landscape we must take more care of nature.</div>Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6523909533985563724.post-62422541001631958232020-11-07T06:49:00.000-08:002020-11-07T06:49:28.497-08:00<p><span style="color: #800180;">CORRECTION COMMENT 7</span></p><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br /></div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br /></div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">People have always trained their dogs to be able to detect many things through smell, for example diseases such as cancer or any other.</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">Now we have discovered that dogs are capable of detecting the coronavirus, did you know?</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br /></div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">Dogs are able to deduce this due to the great capacity of olfate receptors that they possess. Many smells are analyzed in your brain, since the capacity of your brain is forty times greater than the human brain. They rely on smelling the saliva of infected and uninfected people, and for some reason they detect an odor in infected people. When dogs detect a sick person, they should be rewarded for their work and to let them know that they are doing well.</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br /></div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">That dogs are able to do this seems very useful to me, since we could take advantage of them to smell people at airports, to detect infected people and have even more security. This would also be an effective control method and much faster than temperature or prc tests.</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br /></div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">In my opinion, dogs are much more intelligent than us, since they have other more developed senses. They can help us and facilitate the prevention of coronavirus.</div>Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6523909533985563724.post-1714555076537209772020-10-22T09:07:00.006-07:002020-10-22T09:07:54.920-07:00<p><span style="color: #800180;"> CORRECTION COMMENT 5</span></p><p><span style="color: #800180;"><br /></span></p><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">Exams are done to evaluate our work, student´s work, but it doesn't seem like a good idea to me.</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">Not everyone makes the same effort, there are people who have a harder time and get worse marks, and for others it is not so hard and they get very good marks.</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">Taking into account that sometimes we have a bad day and we cannot concentrate the same.</div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;"><br /></div><div style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif;">It is true that you have to evaluate in some way, perhaps exams, but in my opinion, teachers should better appreciate the effort of each one, for example doing other types of activities.</div>Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6523909533985563724.post-15700777669593622192020-10-22T09:03:00.001-07:002020-10-22T09:03:04.493-07:00<p><span style="color: #800180;"> CORRECTION COMMENT 4</span></p><div class="gs" style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; margin: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 20px; width: 1022px;"><div class=""><div class="ii gt" id=":r4" style="direction: ltr; font-size: 0.875rem; margin: 8px 0px 0px; padding: 0px; position: relative;"><div class="a3s aiL " id=":kj" style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small; font-stretch: normal; line-height: 1.5; overflow: hidden;"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div><br /></div><div><br /></div><div>We have always been afraid of bees, we believe that they will sting us for no reason, and that is just a myth, they will not sting you if you do not bother them first.</div><div style="color: #222222;">There are people who are not afraid of them because they know that they will not bite them, I for example when I see one I stay still, not to disturb them and make me sure. However, I have friends who are very afraid of them and run away. Bees are essential in this life, they are in charge of pollination.</div><div style="color: #222222;"><br /></div><div style="color: #222222;">I think that "Free flowers to bring happiness" is a good deed and it is well thought out, each person who receives the bouquet will feel good and it is a detail.</div></div></div></div></div><div class="yj6qo" style="color: #222222;"></div><div class="adL" style="color: #222222;"></div></div></div><div class="hi" style="background-color: #f2f2f2; border-bottom-left-radius: 1px; border-bottom-right-radius: 1px; color: #222222; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; width: auto;"></div></div></div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline" />Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6523909533985563724.post-48138348479910143822020-10-22T09:00:00.001-07:002020-10-22T09:00:09.950-07:00<p><span style="color: #800180;">CORRECTION COMMENT 3</span></p><p><br /></p><p> <span style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small;">Nowadays there are many people who make their living this way through social networks. They are called “influencers”.</span></p><div class="gs" style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; margin: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 20px; width: 1022px;"><div class=""><div class="ii gt" id=":ks" style="direction: ltr; font-size: 0.875rem; margin: 8px 0px 0px; padding: 0px; position: relative;"><div class="a3s aiL " id=":kl" style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small; font-stretch: normal; line-height: 1.5; overflow: hidden;"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div><br /></div><div>They work on internet, their job is to post photos on social networks promoting brands that pay them. It all depends on the number of followers and likes you have.</div><div>For example, clothing brands offer free products, and also many travel agencies offer trips.</div><div>They always make us believe that their lives are perfect, and it is not an easy job even if it seems like it, you have to know how to like people and earn your own fame.</div><div><br /></div><div>Each person thinks differently, and I think it is not a bad job, it isn´t harder than other jobs, but not everyone knows how to entertain people the way they do.</div></div></div></div><div class="yj6qo"></div><div class="adL"></div></div></div><div class="hi" style="background-color: #f2f2f2; border-bottom-left-radius: 1px; border-bottom-right-radius: 1px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; width: auto;"></div></div></div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline" />Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6523909533985563724.post-22496855680391242782020-10-22T08:56:00.003-07:002020-10-22T08:56:22.926-07:00<p><span style="color: #800180;"> CORRECTION COMMENT 2</span></p><div class="gs" style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: Roboto, RobotoDraft, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif; margin: 0px; padding: 0px 0px 20px; width: 1022px;"><div class=""><div class="ii gt" id=":ch" style="direction: ltr; font-size: 0.875rem; margin: 8px 0px 0px; padding: 0px; position: relative;"><div class="a3s aiL " id=":dh" style="font-family: Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif; font-size: small; font-stretch: normal; line-height: 1.5; overflow: hidden;"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div dir="ltr"><div><br /></div><div>Without us realizing October has arrived, a time when we do not know what to wear, one day it is cold, the next hot, the next it rains...</div><div>I think I like summer better, although autumn is also beautiful. Now is it the time to put the summer clothes away and take out the winter ones.</div><div><br /></div><div>Halloween is celebrated in Autumn, it is one of my favourite festivities, we eat chestnuts, we go to horror houses, some wear costumes... I have been all year waiting for this party.</div><div>This year is going to be very different, perhaps there is no terror houses or they will find some way to do it that respects the rules of COVID-19 protocol.</div></div></div></div><div class="yj6qo"></div><div class="adL"></div></div></div><div class="hi" style="background-color: #f2f2f2; border-bottom-left-radius: 1px; border-bottom-right-radius: 1px; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; width: auto;"></div></div></div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline" />Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6523909533985563724.post-83137067140993948652020-10-22T08:47:00.007-07:002020-10-22T08:47:50.585-07:00<p><span style="color: #800180;">CORRECTION COMMENT 1</span></p><p><br /></p><p> <span style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px;">This new school year is going to be different than others, we are experiencing a global pandemic and things cannot continue as before, now we have to take action.</span></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; min-height: 14px;"><br /></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">We have to participate and be responsible, we have to comply with the rules of the protocol: wear a mask, keep our distances, disinfect our hands every time we touch something, etc...</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;"><br /></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">If we comply with the rules we will go back to normal little by little. We all know that it is difficult to comply with all the rules, some are uncomfortable, such as wearing a mask.</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px; min-height: 14px;"><br /></p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;">I think it will take us a long time to get back to normal, but if we all do our part it will not be so complicated, we just have to comply with the rules.</p><p style="caret-color: rgb(34, 34, 34); color: #222222; font-family: "Helvetica Neue"; font-size: 12px; font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; margin: 0px;"><br /></p><br class="Apple-interchange-newline" />Nataliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01111605725852095516noreply@blogger.com0